it's okay but if you compare the original to the edited scan there are some mistakes
mainly on the sides of the right side: the top area has a small white, the tree branch in the middle still has some text, the area where you detexted rangiku's head needs some heal brush to blend in the clone tool. Orihime's kimono's flower is a not fully redrawn, just copy/paste the flower design from the middle of her kimono. Also over all there are some dust/specks that need to be removed.